Narrative

I am writing a narrative about my family and I going to Alaska. From the start I knew that my narrative was going to be long. I was right about that, because it explained everything that happened while I was in Alaska. It was also around a whopping 1,900 words. I had a feeling that I was going to have to shorten it one way or another.

I learned that I should just focus on writing about one specific experience throughout my whole trip in Alaska. Now I knew what one of the things Dr. D was going to tell me when she met with me, but focusing on one specific event wasn't the only thing. I had add more vivid detail and write about the significance of my narrative. After this meeting with Dr. D, I started revising my narrative. When I revised it, it seemed to me I was starting over my narrative, but I got take ideas from my first draft.